nice.... :-)

that was excellent i particuaklly loved,Melting away into the silence. You have used excellent words and description a thoroughly excellent poem,. well done :)

I liked it... it gets a 5 from me! thx for recomending it... maybe you could check out my poems if you have a chance ("Simply By Asking" & "As Good As You")
Thx and keep up the good work!

Great poem. actually brilliant poem. the descriptions were awesome. xmollyxx

wow. i love it. its so deep... I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!! lol take a look at some of mine if you wanna
xox- kristen

WOW!!!! your poem was intoxicating! i love how your write...it was amazing!

I'm speachless, its F'ing great, its so magically true, and so full of deep meaning, magnificantly writtin, very very nice job, congrads.
Ben

another awesome poem, how do you do it?so deep and meaningful and so well written. wish i could write like you.
xnikkix

Ohhh I loved this poem! Probably one of the "dark poems" I've read! Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

Wat color is Cyanide...

you sure like elipses. you are an accomplished suicide writer, now i'd like to see something else. "4"

hey i read book called sparkling cyanide. but i think this poem is way better!

You are such a talented poet and I love reading your poems. Excellent.

*is speechless* this was a really great poem! *stares in amazement* O_O you are really talented. No compaints here. Without a doubt on my mind this is a 5/5.
Take care :],
Cheerfully Cynical

this poem is amazing....i didnt want it to finish...keep up the work.....~sherrie~

Wow great job! xxx

Fantastic poem! Awesome use of words in the writing and you still had room to use rhyme scheme every now and then. 5 all the way. Take care!
-Conner

The language was beautiful and first few stanzas very captivating.. however, I thought that it got a bit unorganized in rhyme and structure of the stanzas. In my opinion it sounds more like a song... but good work, anyway.

a song?? hmm ...and yeah i don't like sticking to a rhyme scheme or structure...boring tht way..but thanks everyone for ur comments..

wow. very speechless, i'm not sure what to say, your words caught my breath. it was fantastic, and thanks for your comment. keep writing :) xxxx