Though perhaps I don't agree witht he views, it's a great poem w/ great descriptions-great job again

Great poem.. 5 stars for this one.. keep it up*
Take Care

it was a really good poem, but it seemed to be lacking abit in structure. that being said i think that your depiction of this scene is ...wow, i can actually picture what it would be like.

Five/Five.

P.S. Thanks for the comment/and or vote on my poems. I really appreciate everything i get on that "gods lost angel" poem....it is so close to my heart that no one can ever put it down, even if it got a 0.1 rating i know it is the best work i will do.

This poem confused me a little bit but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I love how as in Cartharsis you portrayed a kind of angelicness to it.

Caustic. Sp prettyfully caustic.....

By the way, lovely poem.

wow, this is a powerful poem.. you must be proud that you have such talent... i hope that you dont feel like this.. cuz that sounds like it sucks when you really think about it...
take care of you
amanda