by Ashleigh Skye Sep 1, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
This is my first love poem, so I'm not sure if it will be any good because I haven't done this before. I would appreciate any comments and votes.. thanks a lot |
Yep...this happens to me once...and yep...he did turn and walk away...but hey...no matter what...tell the ones you love that you love them...cause sometimes...things might end up differently... |
great poem i can totally relate thats how i feel with one of my best friends great poem and excellent for ur first time writting a love poem |
oh and thanx you very much for the spelling correction Friends.. and everyone else thanx you for the comments i read them all the time and I always love to hear what people think about my poems.. have a good day.. oh ps please take a look at some of my other poems and dont forget to vote and comment |
thanx ppl.. but this is not my first poem, this is my first love poem |
by iwish0207
hey i think this poem is really great but i dont write love poems. but writing though cuz i think this is great!!!!!!! ~michelle~ |