Im glad that you liked it.. and i really appricate your comment |
by Krillin
really well written. And I agree with Lucifer, You should tell him before the secret gets too hard to bear. |
by Kevin J
Yea, A crush can definitely crush you:p. I think you did good job for your first love poem. It's kinda sad in way...I think you lost your happy thoughts:p. Nice write;) |
thanx ppl.. I really aooreciate everyones comments |
*appricate |
by iwish0207
hey i think this poem is really great but i dont write love poems. but writing though cuz i think this is great!!!!!!! ~michelle~ |
thanx ppl.. but this is not my first poem, this is my first love poem |
oh and thanx you very much for the spelling correction Friends.. and everyone else thanx you for the comments i read them all the time and I always love to hear what people think about my poems.. have a good day.. oh ps please take a look at some of my other poems and dont forget to vote and comment |
great poem i can totally relate thats how i feel with one of my best friends great poem and excellent for ur first time writting a love poem |
Yep...this happens to me once...and yep...he did turn and walk away...but hey...no matter what...tell the ones you love that you love them...cause sometimes...things might end up differently... |