by Robert Sep 1, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The desert night is cold and vast, |
A full of structure and thought poem, nice job xxx alex xxx |
by Jenni Marie
I found this to be very disturbing, but of course seeing as it's in the dark category, that's a good thing.. |
I love this one, it is great and original from the beginning to the end. You created captivating atmosphere and superb imagery, I could feel like I was there. The wording is also great in the whole piece, but I don't like the rhymes because there are too many people that use exactly the same words to make rhymes in poems. |
by Rocky
Another fantastic poem from you.the vocab , imagery and flow were excellent. i also liked how deep it was.i dont know why but these 2 lines just grabed me |
Awwroooooo! |