by Timothy
Your dark work is definitely the best. I added you to favorites. You are pretty good, man. |
by Dani Ward
wow, this one was awesome. i really liked the story it tells. |
Woah lol, that was good and creepy. When reading this I was able to imagen myself as the person in it. It's a brillaint poem. I love it, specially because it's unique |
Wow!!..u r like ssooo Good in writing dark poems.....this 1 is another great 1 penned perfectly by u..n lol...it kept me hooked up to the very end..very different n good too.Kp writing! |
Flow was off at times, but other than that, I enjoied it. 5/5 |
Awwroooooo! |
by Rocky
Another fantastic poem from you.the vocab , imagery and flow were excellent. i also liked how deep it was.i dont know why but these 2 lines just grabed me |
I love this one, it is great and original from the beginning to the end. You created captivating atmosphere and superb imagery, I could feel like I was there. The wording is also great in the whole piece, but I don't like the rhymes because there are too many people that use exactly the same words to make rhymes in poems. |
by Jenni Marie
I found this to be very disturbing, but of course seeing as it's in the dark category, that's a good thing.. |
A full of structure and thought poem, nice job xxx alex xxx |