I would imagine you are writing about Elizabeth Bathory. Am I right?

Wow you are a great writter, ive read your other poems and i think writting is really your thing, never stop writting cuz if you do you are giving up your brst gift!

wow did you write this about countess elizabeth bathory? If so i wrote one about her also its not like this though but this was really good. Thank you for commenting on my poems.

omg I love this poem, it's so intriging. I love reading about vampires. I'm glad you made it about a vampiress instead of a vampire like most poeple normally do
as usual your getting a 5 of me

Creative poem. I liked the unique way you told the story. Very well done. Well written dark poem! Take Care! Brooke~

this had a really good story behind it....i really enjoy reading your work...i gave it a 5 x)

Wow...This was so different! a pleasure to read. Very dark and intriguing. I like reading these types of poems...It had a good background. Interesting and excellent write my friend! xxx

This is not the sort of poem that I would normally read and so it is harder to find the words to describe how I feel about it. I will however say that it is another imaginative piece, with a wide use of vocab.

Keep Writing
Nici

That was unique...not expected....but anyways it was really good, flowed well and rhymed amazingly....wow absolutely awesome!!!

leaving their bodies as shells in earth?s crust....

ha ha ha....I am sure you did not mean to do this....(look at earth)

wow...I was not too sure what the 'countess of blood' was untill I read the end..quite a surprise to me actually...I liked it, thisis the first poem about a vampire I have read, and I must say, it made an impression.

Cool-my bad-wicked cool. I loved the darkness surrounding this piece. Very nice word choice and very nice flow. A great poem.
~Faith of the Fallen