That was quite funny.

very good and so very true lol i look forward to reading more of your work

Loved that Robert although took me a while to find it obviously lol - you've been a busy gentleman xx

good.. i love it haha ..5/5 once again.. :)

Shannon<33

i alreeaddyy commented on this one :)

4/5. I liked it alot, i may be a kid but i agree and hate my sister in law with a passion thats exactly what its like so i can relate. The flow was kinda shaky and the question marks are where apostrophes should be. Funny poem though and I'm gonna put it on my favorites just cuz its great and i can relate to it alot. peace

I don't know why I just didn't like it. Maybe humor just isn't my type of poems.

I loved the whole idea, and it was very funny!
but you should try putting each point in its own stanza...

eg.

"1st day it is good to see how they are,
but it?s a pain trying to get repair on my car.

2nd day has us playing cards all night,
but to maneuver in my house is a fight."

the rhyming was good...
the flow of the poem went smooth as well!
but it would make it easier to read, if you put them in different stanza

keep up the good writting

Its nice,.i like it,