What is this poem about in particular?

fwoah...*speechless* ur poems are like the best ive ever heard or read

hey i really liked it u show a real talent in letting ur emotions out keep it up. thanx for commenting on mine

abby xxxxx

that was good, i really liked it. thanks for the comments on my poetry.

though i dont really understand the depth of this poem but i like the way it is written.. nice one~

I finally found the poem! U have so many! I think I need to show more true emotion is my poems! This showed deep emotion which always makes for a better poem! I was abused both emotionally and physically! It's hard to write it all out into a poem because there is so much to the story! I was with this guy for 9 years and he is my sons father! I have moved on and I have never been happier! So I try to write more happy poems! Some of my poems that I first posted were written along time ago. I just started trying to really write recently so as u can see I need some help! Thanx for taking the time to read them! I appreciate it! I am a pro at business letters and dictations but poetry needs improvement! I feel like I write like a small child at times! Well enough of me going on about my writing! Take Care! Brooke

Wow... you are really talented. I'm loving your style of writing.

~ Tina

That was diffrent, the use of the word burn, was repeative, but it worked for the flow is excellent. You did another excellent job. Well written, and the word choice was amazing5/5

Nice repitition
it wasn't to heavy or to weak
wonderful job