by Robert Sep 1, 2004
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
They say we are the wealthiest place to live and thrive, |
by Vanessa
O.k I sort of agree, but i sort of don't. I mean in a way we are weak, but it is because the actions of one, and not the actions of us as a whole. Anyways that aside, the poem was well written, the descrpitive words were well chosen, and the emtion was deep. The flow was great, and the message was real, and every word seemed to be heartfelt. Again Robert, as well as I don't whole heartdly argree with you, I have to give this poem 5/5 because it deserves nothing less. |
by xxxStarSxxx
I can't say that I agree with this poem, but it's still good. ^^ 4/5 |
Not my type of poem, but it |
by skynerraw
I really like the message it gives, I don't think we are really weak, but I still like the poems and it's message. It was a great poem, and amazingly written, nice work! |
by Boy
Nice example of humanity. good work. i like all the feelings and the way you expressed your poem. its your nice work. take care |