its cute , i woudl say its my fave tho, see i know im a punk/rocker , but i dont wear bondage and spike chians shit but if you met me , or spent an hour with me , there is no way that you could think diff , but i deffinatly kno alot of ppl who are like this ( in your poem ) espesially at my high school ! good job tho *4*

Hmm.. looks like I am a stupid. I don't know what you are talking about.. But i liked the poem.. Please keep writting.

Don't feel bad Trincy girl, cause I don't got a clue either. But as I told you before, you are a great writer. Keep doing your thang girl. Bump the Haters, and it's now or later. Always, Ashley!!

lol wooow cool piece! its different and flowed well, you've kinda summed up what alot of ppl are thinking lol, well done!:)beanxx

I don't know what to say about this poem. One part of me wants to say its good and the other part wants me tell you it sucked. I personally think your a hipocrit. Enough said.

Damn i loved the poem...i love the whole meaning behind it of the hypocritical youth...I would defently like to rub this in the faces of a few well known hypocrites. Liberty, I don't know why you would say she's a hypocrit, she's speaking absolute truth in this poem...well written..damn good writer! perfect fitting rhymes...-5

love HMC

This is nothing short of fukin love brilliant.