by Bryce Ellner Sep 1, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
science fiction
It was just before dusk |
by Poetess Lana
Whoa. wasnt expecting that to happen! |
by Jacki
I have to agree with victoria, sorry this has been so late. My vote and comment on this. But i'm here bryce i didn't forget about you lol. ANyways about the poem i never would have expected that she would end up saving his life. I had great visuals while reading this. Excpecially the part about the locket hitting the window on ocasion. I loved this one. I'm undecided if i like this one or 2 the best. I think theyre both amazing. |
by vanessarrr
if i could give it a 6 or more, trust me i would! excellent. i'm partially speechless (considering i managed a couple words). can't wait for your next dark poems! take care:) |