if i could give it a 6 or more, trust me i would! excellent. i'm partially speechless (considering i managed a couple words). can't wait for your next dark poems! take care:)

I have to agree with victoria, sorry this has been so late. My vote and comment on this. But i'm here bryce i didn't forget about you lol. ANyways about the poem i never would have expected that she would end up saving his life. I had great visuals while reading this. Excpecially the part about the locket hitting the window on ocasion. I loved this one. I'm undecided if i like this one or 2 the best. I think theyre both amazing.

Whoa. wasnt expecting that to happen!

another incredible poem, and another 5/5

-Allanah Rayne