Comments : The weight of a Hundred Lives

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacki


    I love the stanza :
    Of all those lives,
    Mines has got to be the worst.
    Everyone has problems,
    But my life is truly cursed.

    I think everybody feels this way, that there life sucks and that its cursed. I know i've felt this way before. I love how you ended this poem too it really fits well.

    Also thanks for commenting on my poem, that was about my grandmother what has altzimers. I have another one called I confess that is to her also. But that is just my confessions to her. Its a horrible thing that deases! I would not wish it on my wose enemy. How is your aunt doing? I know its tough and if you ever need to talk about her and let things out i'll always talk because I know how it is.....Thanks again and awesome poem.