There is definitly the bittersweet tone of revenge in this poem, great write -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Sounds like u went through hell! U told the story with strong emotion u could feel the anger! Chased a your trills the a needs to go and one other typo If you don't pay like they have said instead of don?t paid! Sorry I hate to point out things like that but at work I have to have everything perfect so it's a habit! Anyway good job of letting out ur true feelings! Take Care! Brooke

wow, really good. I liked it. 5/5

Well done. I would be intruiged to know what inspired this.

Great poem! 5.0 ♥

Man your awsome all the poems of yours i read makes me wish i were good at writing poems. dang i suck your so awsome

Wow. Very nicely written! I know a lot of people who can relate to this. Hold strong.
-xx-
Broken

It was sad poem. but it was in love section but i know why it was in love section very truel love. take care 5/5

Wow, it was beautifully written and i'm sorry you went through such a hard time in your life. it was great, deep, you could tell you really meant what you wrote. the structure was great and the rhyming was great, 5/5

You should correct all copy/ paste mistakes in the poem, that would make it easier to read.
Your rhyming seem little forced, which ruined whole impression to me. I personally like deep, metaphorical poetry. You expressed feelings here in a good way, but too obvious.

Wow, like it! Vary strong poem. Beautifully written and very deep....excellent job! Keep up the good work!!!! 5/5