by Robert Sep 1, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Let me tell you a tail that starts beneath the soil, |
by RobinAnn13
I say the same thing for this one as I said about the others. I did think that this idea was very unique, which is good. Maybe to help with the flow you could break it up into stanzas. just a suggestion. <3<3 |
A poem full of emotion an soul really enjoyed experiencing what oyu felt when you wrote this xxx alex xxx |
by Jenni Marie
I liked this...the imagery you painted in this piece was breathtaking, it created such strong vivid pictures for me. |
I like this, it is filled with creativity and great imagination, it has superbly created atmosphere and good descriptions from the beginning to the end. Whole poem is greatly written, it has good flow and descriptive lines. |
by Boy
I am agree. that wassuch a great poem. take care 5/5 |