Yes, another good one. I have a comment and a question. First the comment: Your style is very good, only you make several spelling mistakes. Either use spell check, or maybe try slowing down a bit? I don't say this to be mean, just to help you improve a little.
The question: Are you into Dungeons and Dragons, Lord of the Rings, or even Ultima Online? I have played Ultima for years. All these are akin to your poem here.
Timothy

I read alot and write alot about old legends and try to stay true with many folk lores As for D&D nevr played it but do play Dialbo alot well thank for the advise I will do spell check more often ok take care

Nice storyline however the many mistakes and flow jumbling towards the end made it a bit difficult to read straight through. keep up the work with the corrections it will be even better. corrections needed: tail=tale, forever=forever, the=they, short on height should be short in height. 3/5

First off.
Your title is spelled wrong.
It's "Treasure Keppers"
I couldn't find this poem in the search box
Because of the way you spelt it.

I loved your verb usage.
But I'm sorry, m'dear.
I just found your topic to be quite dull.
...
All in all,
It was okay.
Not the best I've read from you
But also not the worst.
4/5?

This was a great poem and you are a great poet

wonderful job keep it up =]]

I am agree. that wassuch a great poem. take care 5/5

I like this, it is filled with creativity and great imagination, it has superbly created atmosphere and good descriptions from the beginning to the end. Whole poem is greatly written, it has good flow and descriptive lines.
Great job on this piece!

I liked this...the imagery you painted in this piece was breathtaking, it created such strong vivid pictures for me.

I found the concept to be highly imaginative and original, the flow was good troughout and the ending was filled with such intensity.

Beautiful work on this.

A poem full of emotion an soul really enjoyed experiencing what oyu felt when you wrote this xxx alex xxx

I say the same thing for this one as I said about the others. I did think that this idea was very unique, which is good. Maybe to help with the flow you could break it up into stanzas. just a suggestion. <3<3