by Robert Sep 1, 2004
category :
Life, society /
about society
Two Brothers |
by Michelle18
This is a good poem..although in some places your flow was a bit off and some lines were too long... but i liked the concept. |
An exellent poem , I personally couldn't find any flaws , great imagary xxx alex xxx |
by Jenni Marie
The only thing that let's this poem down is the spelling. |
by JustKristina
This one didn't keep my attention, and i had to re-read it a couple of times to get all the way through it. I liked the concept though. but the rhyming seemed forced. Not all poems have to rhyme.. maybe try something like that because you have beautiful and wonderful ideas filled with emotion and feeling. i think with a little work on these poems, you could be great! :o] |
by Pete
Simply wonderful story! |