by Tasha S
I love it. It is really intense. You have great talent. I hope you keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your poems |
by Startle Me
You really have some syllable problems. |
by StormyStar
I love reading your poems.. your so good. keep it up! |
by Pete
Simply wonderful story! |
by JustKristina
This one didn't keep my attention, and i had to re-read it a couple of times to get all the way through it. I liked the concept though. but the rhyming seemed forced. Not all poems have to rhyme.. maybe try something like that because you have beautiful and wonderful ideas filled with emotion and feeling. i think with a little work on these poems, you could be great! :o] |
by Jenni Marie
The only thing that let's this poem down is the spelling. |
An exellent poem , I personally couldn't find any flaws , great imagary xxx alex xxx |
by Michelle18
This is a good poem..although in some places your flow was a bit off and some lines were too long... but i liked the concept. |