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by jamie25 Sep 1, 2004 category : Love, romance / lasting love
I burn with desire, as i cling to my sanity, fearful, hopeful, useless fighting what's meant to be Standing on the edge of my destiny, your love constantly arresting me, a ruthless,restless calamity is this how love is supposed to be? bound to a painful pleasure i cannot rise above, do i give in to this imprisonment or say goodbye,my love? So hateful,so sweet,so hurtful so much in love this is the misery, the Ecstasy i cannot rise above the most amazing, heartbreaking love i know I'll ever know so tell me love, should i stay or should i go? *votes and comments appreciated
by Timothy
Jamie: I know you probably haven't had a chance to write more today, its only 12:30, but get on it, sisteh!
Jamie, I agree with what Meena said about that line. Very well put. Nice fluid style of poetry, and I'm not just saying that because I am your brother!