Absolutely beautiful. Great work.

very nicely written and a wise decision, at least I think it was, but then I know how the mind works, and the mind is the devil's playground, keep on writing Holly I enjoyed this poem so very much Harry Bryant

ah those times of burning passion, that overcome us, and the the guilt of stolen moments, that sometimes can overwhelm as much as the passion did. nicely written, and nicely thought out, your honesty is to be applauded. keep up the good work; Harry

wow that was an anwsome amount of honesty! i enjoyed reading that although i cant relate.

u seem to hav alot of ppls attention on ur peoms - its kool.

by the way u hav a totally brillant name

check out some of my peoms if u like.
id luv ur opinion on my newest which are continous story called
'The Boy With No Name part 1 & 2'

all the best - Holly