WOW!!! beautiful,Tricy! Such good pictures to demonstrate yearning!

nice 1....ure missing ure fiance arent you?????

You have some pretty powerful things in here:
Like a woman after her first delivery
Wanting to see the baby, I yearn .
I was in aw over this poem. You did an excellent job writing it.

Wonderfull....Yearn.....What literature...Mind blowing.....I also wish someone Yearns for me...I couldn't find time to read all ur poems. But i will certainly do it one day.....Amazing..Keep Writing.....

that was pretty good but the close was kinda uneventful but still a good write keep it up if you got time read Hold Me and tell me what you think. Take care

I thought it will be fun to try applying natures thirst to intensify the rythm a little... well, here i go, It is beautiful.