i really liked this one. THe funny thing is when i first started reading this i could realate to it. When I was 14 this man showed up and the door & something inside of me said I know who this man is. I never met him before. It was biolical father I looked at my brother and said thats my dad. Well after my mom came back in the house she introudced me to him and I said I already know....But anyways I really liked this poem you did a great job :) 2 thumbs up there bryce