The fire we've created

by Kaitlyn   Sep 2, 2004


A simple flick of the wrist and fire is born
through the depths of my soul
it burns madness into my body
I breathe in as a sudden sense of calm
washes over my body like the ocean
A simple breeze and the fire is killed
Dead.
dead like so many of the souls in this world today
living beings being treated as animals
as trash
as worthless nothing
the days we live with out really living
and yet the flame still burns in my body
I breathe out as ash falls upon my skin
It burns like hell but not a muscle in me moves
I soak it up
enjoy the pain
smile as smoke escapes my lips
the lips you kissed so long ago
I burn for you
for our love
for our lust
my lips tremble at the mere thought of you
of your touch that burned like fire
through the depths of my soul
fire that’s so magically created
yet so purely destroyed in a heart beat
the same heart that still tries to beat
after the flame that was our love
was destroyed by the wind
the wind that you now hold so dear
for she is the wind that distinguished our flame
our love
our lust
and as I sit here alone tonight
scars on my body from ash
from the fire that burned within me
within us
It’s not the wind that put out the flame
but a simple tear drop
falling from above
A tear drop gone unnoticed
unseen
A tear drop missing your kiss
your touch
your fire
missing your kiss like I’ve never felt before
because me with out your kiss
with out your love
with out the fire we created
Is like a cigarette with out a flame

-:- please comment and let me know what you guys think.. this poem isn't really like my other ones and I want to know if I should continue to write more like this, or what... please comment! thanks

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  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    yes, i think u should write more like this. that's a good poem.