Dude not to say this is not a nice poem but it belongs more within the creepy side of things dont yea think, other then that i loved the meaning behind the poem -
raindops 5/5

I'm not so sure the "love" category is right for this poem. I agree with Raindrops, it is a bit creepy.

HOWEVER, saying that, I did love it. ^_^ At first I was a bit "WTF, what is he doing with this?" but as I read on, something about it made me grin [in a cheeky fashion]. It had a mixture of themes within it, I think. I don't really know, but something worked in it, I just can't fingerpoint what I liked most.

Good job, though.

Ooo twisted! I loved the ending even though the beginning really didnt capture my attemtion. You over used the word "I" which threw of the flow for me in my opinion. Other than that you expressed yourself nicely and I could imagine everything you were saying. Well done.