WOW! Excellent, Hayley! So emotional!

Just a few things in the third stanza:

You let me look like a fool
As I allow (you) to see inside my heart
Only to tell (me) (you're) not interested
And that we should be apart

I can really relate to this one... have been there before! Great work!

That's put very well. I can feel your pain.

Awesome poem my girl..really liked it alot. Love, Tim