Eyes

by ♥kHarIsMa♥   Sep 2, 2004


Beware of boys with eyes of green,
you say you love them, they say "same with me"
Beware of boys with eyes fo gray
you say you love them, they say it the next day.
Beware of boys with eyes of blue,
you say you love them, they say "I love you to"
But beware of boys with eyes of brown,
you say you love them, and they turn you down.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Shelbie

    Yeah I know the truth.

  • 20 years ago

    by FireCracker

    awesome job ... ! keep it up / Lol .. !

  • 20 years ago

    by seraf

    nice poem,
    I have a curiosity, Can you quench it?
    your poems are nice and almost love poems. What makes you write such poems? just by feelings or due to experiences in life?
    i had already mailed you. As ,i got impressed by your poems , i am again writing to you.
    one thing , i am a pessimist writer. I don't know, why? I love death every moments.
    bye

  • 20 years ago

    by seraf

    nice poem,
    I have a curiosity, Can you quench it?
    your poems are nice and almost love poems. What makes you write such poems? just by feelings or due to experiences in life?
    i had already mailed you. As ,i got impressed by your poems , i am again writing to you.
    one thing , i am a pessimist writer. I don't know, why? I love death every moments.
    bye

  • 20 years ago

    by Erika

    I really like all of your poems!! especially feelings. I can relate to that poem the most! but you're an awesome writer! keep it up! and thank you for commenting on my poem! :)

    ~*Erika*~