I love these lines:
As he stood outside his house.
Staring down in the moonlight
At the locket cupped within his hands.
Staring into her faded eyes

I thought this was amazing. And this one is my favorite one so far. You have made this story become better and better. You are very talented, and i'm so glad i wrote mine to inspire you to write this one. I beilve this one knocks mine right out of the water. Great Job Bryce, great job!

oooh! gets very interesting! can't wait for the next one. take care:)

Wow, nice. theres more, right? :-)

5/5

-Allanah Rayne