This is some powerful stuff... keep up the great work! |
by xo kisses xo
Omg! that is such a great poem.; so full of emotion! i love how u repeated that one stanza twice! i would deff give tht a 10/10 but i can't *tear* so 5/5 |
by lydia
Whoa!that wuz frickin awsome i only wish i could write like u ='( |
by josh
So sad, and it happens to too many people. |
by Breeeezie
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST POEM IV EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 THINK OF THE HIGHEST NUMBER AND ILL PUT IT AS A RATE |
This piece is so powerful, i love the way you start and finish with the same ideas, so well written |
by NearlyCrazy6
Wow. i have goose bumps! that was an awesome poem. i really loved it!!! |
by shannon
That was an amazing poem |
by neo
I know the feeling oh so well |
by Baby Rainbow
Omg thats excellent, so deep and moving it does really make you shiver. well done its good, hope your ok xxxxxxxxx |
Wow thats sad. very deep. where'd u get your insperation? |
by Tracee
I Loved It, Very Well Written. It is my favorite, deff out of any poem on here, it just explains itself so well. |
by Brookey Rawr
This is really really good. im really new to the whole poetry stuff... i only put 2 poems on here... and they are both pretty bad... but this is amazing. if you could... read my 2 poems and comment.. giving me advice or whatever... telling me what you did or did not like... so i can work on it and fix it... thanx |
by Brookey Rawr
This is really really good. im really new to the whole poetry stuff... i only put 2 poems on here... and they are both pretty bad... but this is amazing. if you could... read my 2 poems and comment.. giving me advice or whatever... telling me what you did or did not like... so i can work on it and fix it... thanx |
by robert rush
GREAT POEM I REALLY LOVED IT I JUST HOPE ITS NOT A TRUE POEM BUT YOU DID REALLY GOOD! |
I have never read anthing so Amazing in my life! |
I have never read anthing so Amazing in my life! |
by Aubrey
Good poem. |
That was really good!!! |
This is freaking amazing :] |