That is amazing I love this poem it's the reason I started writing even though I haven't read it in awhile every time I do it takes my breath away I'd love to have a conversation message me plz

This is really really good. I like the way it tells a story and still sounds like a poem.

I remember being there. My love and deepest empathy to all who have and will walk this road. Thank you for giving us a voice.

This is very well written and portrays the emotions of helplessness very distinctly. Relatable too.