It's a great poem, everything in what defines an One Love, trust and honesty, but it still has a reverse side that makes it a bit sad. Friend and lover can't be same so I have the impression that this is more about a desired One Love and the one isn't quite sure if it is rejoined. I think that gives the whole poem another slightly sad appearance, but it doesn't harm it a bit at all, it's a beautiful and thoughtful poem. 5/5 !

Keep up such great work ...

I would be truely glad if you could look at my lately written poems. Thank you a lot.

Sabine

WOW! This was soooo beautiful! I loved it! Just...WOW! Your a great writer!
Love always,
Haily
xoxoxoxoxo

i liked this it was really sweet and full of true emotion. a couple spelling mistakes but thats okay now and then
~Freak~

i liked this one because it had a romantic side well done...full of emotion and expressed well x)

A real change from your other poem, but it still worked well. Some of the timing seemed to be a little off, as some lines where twice the length of others. However the overall efffect of this poem outweighed these minor points.

Keep Writing
Nici

Beautiful poem...a couple spelling mistakes...but it's really lovely :)

wow, that was beautiful. andl ike I've said before, I'm not much for these kinds of poems but I enjoyed it:)

It's not really my style but, I can tell that you have put a lot of emotion into it...5/5

ahhhh i hope they walked with you ha ha

It gets down to the point.
Love is good and bad, you capture this aspect well.