by Amanda
Yeh i found it look! Commented on the bird in my hand first. Anyway i love nature poems so this is deffinately a 5! :) |
by AJ
I really like it, really good. can't wait to read more |
by Jason Meres
Well expressed point of view....nicely done. |
by julie
Amazing poem. Especially the way which you gave the owl thought that we can see. It really made me think, Are we infact just a virus? That is destroying the world for all other species? I think so |
Great poem! 5.0 ♥ |
by ~*Ley*~
i like how you personalize it by saying it happend to his wife. that was really good. ive caught a constant theme, and so im guessing you as a person doesnt think very kindly of us humans haha. im not sure what the owl reminded me of yet....im thinking..rapists actually. because they take the most beatiful things and do the most horrible and then cast them aside not even keep them for a relationship, or their "meat" as you said. yea..i really like your poems about animals because they make me think. good job on this one. one of your best.. |
by Forever29
Excellent. Reminds me of a pet owl that I had as a child. It had been shot and brought home to live in our tree. Needless to say, it died of gangrene. It was so sad! |
Excellent write. This is one of my favorite nature poems. Keep up the good work. |
by charles
Your work as far as subject matter is good although at times it became choppy |
by Tom Swart
I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite. Most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called The memory of my shadow. The poem Searching also has a nature theme - I wrote this way too long ago when I was a kid and have thought many times to rewrite it as an adult. But somethings are better left the way they are no matter how badly you wish to change them. |
by Rachel RTVW
Interesting perspective through the eyes of an owl. Nice job! |