by Robert Sep 3, 2004
category :
Life, society /
about society
Hold me close tonight, |
by Amanda
Hey yeh i did like it... It's so ... you! LOL! I like your work and you have talent :) My poetry is rubbish compared to yours! Keep it up! :) |
that's great, you flowed great man. Thats now I need to write. I noticed you didnt break it up anywhere like I do. 5/5 |
by Jason Meres
I'm continually surprised by your range of poetry, and this original piece is no exception. Well done. |
by AJ
pretty good 5/5 ~keep it up~ |
I liked this but once again the rythming felt alittle forced and when that happens i feel as if it's less personal and less moving..... But it was different and sweet... |