thanx but if you read it like a child you will see the meaning in it the poem was based on a jewish child in a Nazi Germany the rest is there it's just you need to read it like a child try it again and you may see it. The reason I wrote it this way was because I wanted people to see this in the eyes of a child hope you understand it now Robert

wow, that was an excellent poem. i loved it.

wow, good job! awsome work.... Please check out my poems "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind" and "my dad: dead and gone forever" please comment/rate it would mean a lot ot me.. thanks ((I voted a 5 on this poem))

I liked this but once again the rythming felt alittle forced and when that happens i feel as if it's less personal and less moving..... But it was different and sweet...

pretty good 5/5 ~keep it up~

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I'm continually surprised by your range of poetry, and this original piece is no exception. Well done.

that's great, you flowed great man. Thats now I need to write. I noticed you didnt break it up anywhere like I do. 5/5

Hey yeh i did like it... It's so ... you! LOL! I like your work and you have talent :) My poetry is rubbish compared to yours! Keep it up! :)