its a very nice poem, i hope you keep writing...Lee Nicole*

Very nice poem, i like the fact that it doesn't rhyme. its like your life (if the poems about you) isn't perfect and neither should the poem. do u get what i mean? xmollyxx

Your poetry is really deep and really good 4 your age, just thought i'd add. xmollyxx

i make crappy poems if they're a school project etc. how do you do it? lol. well, this one was very nice and i liked the fact that you had a refrain. you don't see that in most poems... take care:)

nice 1 keep writing!