WOW!! amazing poem!! i can really relate!! it was soo great!! good job!!! I think your such an awesome writer!

i liked it... =) def a 5 =) very well written =)... keep up the good work... hope u pass by mine =) ciao

awesome job! You have an amazing gift to make people visualize the things you write. Very good job! ~dandy~

that was an amazing poem and your a great writer! keep up the good work and never give up!

Tina

i was browsing throught the titles and saw " these twisted lines " i thought thats a great title i must read it , i hoped it was gonna be as good as i was expecting , sadly it wasnt , the thing is it was even better ... superb

You're really good but I'm gueesing you realized that sonce your poems have all been visited like hundreds of times, keep it up, you have a gift, really.

wow that was the best poem i have ever read. i cant not believe what i just read. great poem

OMG i love this poem soooo much i havent seen a poem that wonderfully written in a while keep up the good work p.s. dont stop writting you have an awsome talent dont let others tell you different!