Comments : Our Hidden Truth

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "Books of secrets sent down from father to son,
    were burned or torn because of religion that worshipped only one."

    ^^Favourite lines of this piece. So meaningful and deep.

    "When that day comes then you will forever know,
    how our culture will shine and glow."

    ^^Beautiful ending, so much depth and meaning.

    I thought this was beautifully written. The flow was good throughout, imagery wonderfully portrayed and the message behind the words was wonderfully displayed.