Comments : What Do You Think Of JFK

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Good... except two things I didn't quite agree on:
    - Jackie and JFK 'appeared' as a couple of true love, though there was gossip of it being a facade. So, I'm not sure if they were truly in love.
    - The last line's rhyme just... seemed a bit out of it for me, I think it would've worked better if it fitted in with the poem more. I don't know; a sentence summing up JFK.
    But apart from that; nice work. JFK facinates me, I believe his death was a conspiracy, but unfortunately we may never find out.
    Well done!
    "He had is flings, we are sure of this,
    by the most sexy women that blew him a kiss."
    They were my favourite rhyme... the Marylin Monroe affair was quietly publisized, I remember hearing little on it when I was study JFK.