this is very sweet! it makes me think about what it was like when i was younger. very nice work!

..I don't even know what I could possibly say to sum up how I feel about this..

This was beautifully written..the imagery you portrayed in here was wonderfully done, it was like I could -see- everything that was happening.

I loved the transition from such light feelings at the start of the poem and then to such a deep meaningful message at the end.

Beautiful.