When you said..

by tia   Sep 5, 2004


When you said
I love you
I said thank you
When you complimented me
I said thank you
When you were serious
I laughed
When you held me
I hugged you
When you yelled at me
I made fun of you
When you slapped me
I behaved
When you left me
I followed you
You looked back
And told me to stay there
I itched my hair
And licked my pear
You looked fearless
Drove car off in the mist
As i waited there
Someone yelled my name
Asked if i could hear
I closed my ears
My eyes were in tears
I finally appeared
That my love was no more
When he shut the door
I was now poor
I am now a wh0re
Standing at the grocery store
Holding up my dress
While all the guys were impressed
There wife's yelled in dis press
The guys tried to come over
As there mother drove up
In the land Rover
With his dog name clover
He was all red in the face
His wife slapped his back
Said were leaving
He said but you weren't done shopping
She said get it
I was waiting for somebody
As time drifted by
I had no ride
I just died~

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  • 20 years ago

    by tia

    well thank you, i dont know. i like the poems like that. but thanx