that was awsome poem that you've wrote...Keep on writing...check on mine "Heart of Mine"...lol..thanx...Great again..
5/5...

**with the hearth/love Sedusha**

wow, gotta be the most touching poem ive read so far on this site, great work! can relate to every line within this poem right now!

That was a very good poem!!!!

i can totally relate to this because of my ex-boyfriend adam. this poem describes him and I. i gave it a 5. also thanx for commenting on my poem! great poem!

Okay okay...this by far wins my vote on the best of your poems...yup this is for sure number one...it was a tough choice but this one comes out on top.... i loved it.... it was amazing...beautiful... actually i would say it left me sppechless but im talking so i guess it didnt....but if i wasnt so hyper right now im sure it would leave me speechless....lol...ttyl luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Hey great poem. i know how you feel.