omg gosh that was so beautifil i loved and that's all i know to say! keep writing!

WONDERFUL job Amy!!! You're such a talented writer!! I love your work so much!! This was so terrific!! It all flowed so nicely and... just wow! lol. I can't find any proper words to tell you how great this was and how great all your work is! I loved it!!!

Amy

Both of those poems were written lovely. Good job. Keep writing...

i loved the second part! it was beautiful!

This was awesome! I loved the way this one was from his point of view! Very creative!! I loved them both!!

I loved reading both parts 1 and 2!.. It's sad, but beautiful..

omg i love this poem it is excellent and so is the 1st part i got chills and i almost cried this was really good! keep up the good work.
-Britt