omg that is so sad....i'm sorry that you lost your friend. keep up the great writing though. luv nicole =)

I wish she was alive to read this poem... to know that there were people like you caring for her so deep. I appreciate it... And obviously it is a beautiful poem...

Oh my goodness whatta beautiful ode to your friend - im sure she smiles down on you - this was amazing piece. The story line, the rhythm and use of descriptive words makes it a masterpiece well done! Looking forward to reading some more of your work please check out mine if you have a chance Thanks Much Luv Eirisa

This poem is marvellous!! You have very great talent and I am adding you as one of my favorites. Take Care=)

This poem is marvellous!! You have very great talent and I am adding you as one of my favorites. Take Care=)

omg wat is it with u and words? u turn sum sunning words and sum dull word, put dem together and a masterpiece we have! it was exellent, she'd be blessed to kno you

xxoo,
alysse