thts so deep brill poem u shud read mine ----what reli happened (3)-I promise you, Beth ---- its quite simal good job keep it up ur a good writer

Wonderful poem.. I love it.. It's so sad.. I almost cried.. Very emotional.. In fact i read it before i got an account on this site and i loved it i just couldn't comment : ( Anyway i love the poem 5/5 Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

~Jessica

Brilliant work. Great great great poet you are....*smiles*
5/5
Jenn.

Great job.Very emotional!

WOW that is really scary OMG i am so speechless right now but it was a very good poem it scared me alot keep up the good work luv kal

Oh wow awesome poem
new idea too!
I love the last 2 stanzas,the poem was gr8 overall!
I totally love it
keep it up
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Wow....powerful...i like the writing style...

Thanks for commenting on my poems and I love your poems I used to read all of your poems I just didnt know you would like mines but thanks very much I added you to favorites,Im back and I'll be looking forward to more comments from you if you also have any advice let me know

have a great day-Claude

Lots of emotion

Wow. This was amazing. Very deep. I loved it.