I like it. It was very intense

Tasha S

Very strong poem! Like it though! Very good and thanks for all the comments. Very much appreciated. :)

its a really good poem... well done 5/5...

read ur comments in one of my poems, well im not playing the victim its that i am as im put in trouble...

I really like the idea, but this way of writing a poem is REALLY hard, and some of the rhymes seemed forced... I think you would have done better if you didn't use rhymes on this one, but concentrated on making a clever rhytm...But the poem has a interesting meaning and story, and I like it..

cheers

wow I liekd it, I really like the ending to this it was really good. Keep up the good work!

the words u use fit in ur poem beautifully...great job 5/5

Great job i loved it keep up the good work.. You had a great rhyme scheme going and the poem was unique never really have read one on the killers end. Great job 5/5

Very strong.
one of the best i've read

I loved it.
The flow was flawless and the emotion was deep.
The rhyming didn't seem forced.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Okay so i am completely in love with the last line.. :D alsoi love how you start every line with turn around.. it really helps to reinforce that aspect of the poem :D