okay, first off, maybe you need a little "happy drink", but beyond that, I like how you devised a way of getting "cu r se" words through the censor.
I write short stories sometimes that are generally paranormal, and I have one where a man invokes a "retribution demon" that possesses him and gives him near limitless powers to gain revenge (and only on the people that wronged him) until sun up, when the "soul retrievers" collect his soul for payment. Your poem reminded me of that story.

good good.... i like it! good job again!

amazing i loved it..well written and well done...i loved reading it! Good job and keep it up because in my eyes i see someone that can acheive writing! Lyssa

shit that was awesome i could picture and everything! kick as job girlie :D
-Mortalidaga
xxxTakeCarexxx

good discripitions.