I'm not so sure about the style of this poem, but you got the moe for a serial killer down pretty well. Most do lead a dual life. Interesting story-poem. Um, btw, are you having a bad day? All your poems today are DARK!!

Another serial killer poem!!!! I guess SherlockHomes didn't read the poems.. Else he would have helped to get that killer behind bars.... It's interesting to read your story-poems...

"and left her laying her their."

I thought it should be "there" not "their"

That was really good, I couldn't stop reading it! Sorry I havent gotten to read much latley, I've been every which-a-way these past few weeks and its hard to find time to get on the internet.

--Bryce~

What inspired me to write this one? Hhhmm well have you ever heard about that handsome man called Ted Bundy? If not heres his story..
http://www.crimelibrary.com/serial_killers/notorious/bundy/index_1.html?sect=2

LoL... isn't ted bundy the one guy off of the sho (WUT IS ITS NAME.. i cant remeber) with the wife with big red hair... MARRIED WITH CHILDREN... yea thats it...

ok... i went to the site... now i feel stupid.. lol.. ne wayz... liked the poem jacki, good job!! keep up the darkness... Me Likey!!