Comments : He Lived for A Month (part 1)

  • 20 years ago

    by Moonx3

    nice poem..lol..

  • 20 years ago

    by Kristin

    aww that's sad....good rhyming!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Brilliant poem

  • 20 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Let see what happens at the end...

  • 20 years ago

    by Victoria

    My gosh:( That's one of the sadest poems i've read...I wander what happens...AWW..it's sad. <3

  • 20 years ago

    by Heather Clark

    Is it true? if so i'm really sorry, if not it's still really good at getting the feeling across

  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    it's all true...

  • 20 years ago

    by Allen

    Tthe poem is well written as always...:( based on the title... I sense a sad ending :( Im sorry... I'll go on and read the next part... take care.