by vanessarrr Sep 8, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
But he lived to amaze the others and me. |
by happy days
that was really good but really sad .. keep up the good work |
That was really good...My aunt had a few lost, its sad when it happens...this is really touching and i think i even cried...thanks! |
by HOLLY ARMER
You have turned a tragedy into a positive message, truly amazing. You and your family are in my thoughts and prayers. Just remember they are never really gone as long as you keep them alive in your heart! Take care~Holly |
by ©romoж
so sad....but beautiful poem..perfect work...keep writting girl...and thanks for the nice commenting...all i appreciate it!!.. |
by Allen
:( sad like I expected... Im really sorry for your lost, but Im sure he is at a much much better place now. This poem was very touching and with a very good ending parts. I loved reading it... I wish you well :) take care now. |