by Leah20 Sep 8, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Sleeping she awakes |
by Richard
very dark poem i like devil type poem im a dark kinda guy so anyways not a devil worshipper tho lol 5/5 im adding u 2 favs |
by Rolo
Well, I must say..this was quite an interesting read. I can see in a previous comment that this involved supernatural forces. It kept my attention, and was dark indeed. The flow was nice, and I enjoyed it. Great job. |
by Robert
This was a good story/ poem and read well but the end was too hazy it left too much to my imagination what happend to her? Well it was a good piece of work until the end keep trying... |
by Dorotea©
Okay, at a few parts i got a bit bored and trailed off, but otherwise i thought this poem was very good, and it was also well written. Its just that this isnt exactly my type of poem, but i still thought you did a good job on it. 4/5 from me, keep on writing. |
by Robyn Park
Wow. This was magnificent. As most people have said, it's very mysterious. This has got to be my favorite by you. Keep it up. |